Comments : Twisted love

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    A real simple poem that gets a clear message across. I like how you went with a traditional structure in this poem and also the rhyming was descent as it didn't seem forced. Overall you did a good job getting out your emotions in this poem and also putting your heart into it. Great job and keep writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Simple but very good! :)