Open wounds

by never let go of the falling angels   Aug 15, 2010


A soul opens up like a sky with a bright sun on a happy day
A soul breaks like gray clouds pouring rain as lightening strikes
A heart gives up building walls when a soul is hurt
A soul may give up when they think theres no point
When theyre not going any where
Leaving them to break, to cry, to be numb, to hurt, to think, to lose all control
Leaving with open wounds that are hiding so well
She feel lost, out of control, tired, irritable, with a mixed up mind
A tear falls, but a smile is on
No one can see what she feels inside
She shows her mind as she wants not by what it feels
Shes tired stress and confused but she doesnt let anyone see the tears she wants to cry
She holds it deep down inside until they cant be held any more

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sora

    A lovely heartfelt poem. a piece from one's heart is the most deepest, purest poem. and this is what that is. i enjoyed reading this, i believe that your words are quite true. job well done 5/5

    Ash