by Jackie
A good poem, never heard of love being referred to as a lighthouse. 5/5 |
by Jackie
A good poem, never heard of love being referred to as a lighthouse. 5/5 |
by BlueJay
Usually i dont like repetition in poems because it gets tired and takes away from the sentiment in the piece, but for this you have done a good job of not making it feel quite so draggy or as in some annoying even. The piece is well written and the emotion is well formed. Nice job. |