This is very thoughtful...expressions
perfect
..u have such a unique attitude with poetry..

5/5 this is nominated!

Though I feel this poem was cleverly written, for some reason, i didn't enjoy it as much as I would've liked. Perhaps it was the thtree-line stanzas. They distorted the rhythm, in my most humble opinion. I did like the connection of the first and third line of each stanza, though. I felt very calm while reading it, by the way.

Brad

P.S. Pleaes comment and vote on all the poems you read.

That is the beauty of nature..you have nicely portrayed it with a smooth flow..liked the read :)