by Jenn
hey, I reeally liked this poem to, Im sorry if thats how it really is for you, but your not alone, Ive gone through the same thing with my dad, but I moved out and now things are better, if ya ever want to talk im here!! Good poem...:) |
by Emily
Wow its really good. keep it up. i'll try to read you other poems and futer poems, your a good writer. |
This poem is just like my life! my dad says horrible things to me all the time and hes really violent, i wish he wud just see what it feels like to be called a mistake! sorry bout that Wickied Poem!! Slyangelred |
I totally relate to this one, my dad was horrible too, but since I've moved away from home, I'm finally free!!! Hope that you are ok??? Great poem, so intense and sad!!! |
by Brittney
hey this poem is awsome but really sad!!! I think u did a great job writing it thou! I hope that ur not abused or ne1 else that u no but if so i will pray for you! keep up the good work i give it a 5 and i will read and comment on some more of your poems keep up the work ur and awsome poet! |
by Unbreakable
Sad poem, but GREAT writing, i love your poems, keep it up, they're wonderful. |
Not my faveorite, but it's still really good. |
by Kally
This is really good.. sad but good.. tears are falling on my cheek now.. |