Love My Depression.

by ShIsAnA tHe OnE aNd OnLy   Aug 18, 2010


Love my Depression.
Trigger my inner Emotions.

Love my Depression.
Tears are hiding my Face.

Love my Depression.
Tampering with Death.

Love my Depression.
Talking..I mean lie-ing my way to the top.

Love my Depression.
Trap my words in a box.

Love my Depression.
Tragedies are unbelievable.

Love my Depression.
Tell me what to do...please.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Nice form and flow;) I used to love mine too...until I figured out it was all a lie.

  • 14 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I loved reading your poem. I am into contradictions because life seems to be all about that. :)

  • 14 years ago

    by mandy

    A very clever write. I liked the repetitiveness, I use it in my own writing sometimes, and I find it really helps to get your point across. 5/5 keep writing!

    mandy :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    Really love this one5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    It was effective the way you started every line with "love my depression" and then made a statement contradicting that, i thought the idea was great. And i really liked it.

    However maybe you could have worded it a little better.
    I personally didnt really like:
    "Love my Depression.
    Talking..I mean lie-ing my way to the top."
    ^ that bit there.

    nice work still :)