Comments : Winged Days (Fibonacci)

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    What a deep and meaningful poem you have made, Meena!

    Something to ponder upon long and hard indeed...

    I think you made an excellent word choice for this format, all words were important here:) Especialy that last line is a haunting one, lol.

    A very good job!

    God bless and a hug,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Let me admit this is fabulous ...u have done amazingly deep expressions ..
    I think u comin back is such impressing haha

    gr8 job
    loved ur work
    looks forward to see more
    5/5
    keep goin

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Meena
    Welcome back :)
    You did a great job on this form.
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Thought provoking and I really like how you did this form.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    // have we lived a truthful life or lived in fear?
    //

    a thoughful write compelling us to think for a while and look back at our life...
    beautifully written...

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Way to go, Meena:)

    Congrats and well deserved win!

    Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Much thought in this well written Fibonacci

  • 14 years ago

    by Lana

    Your words definately made me sit up and think. Time tends to slip by too quickly and often we find ourselves still 'promising' to do something, finish something and before we know it months have gone by and we are still making these promises.

    Thank you for the explaination on this form, it sounds very complicated but you have done a great job with it.

    Congrats on your win, very well deserved.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win Meena very well deserved :)
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... This was a very interesting poem... I really enjoyed it. I loved the meaning behind it and I liked that you taught me a new kind of poem writing. Congrats on the win!! Take care :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Well done and good last question. More than likely some of both.

  • 14 years ago

    by Anthony M

    My favorite type of poem; forces me to become introspective and ponder life. Very well penned:)

    5/5 win worthy:)