"Where bright lights went off, there comes midnight"
- Your first line captured me immediately!

This whole poem had a pretty dark aura about it, i could feel the sadness portrayed. You did a great job :D

A very good poem. Showing the writers true feelings known and the emotions come forth really good as well. I could feel them in every line. Good job and keep writing.

This dark poem hit the mark with its imagery yet it is so beautifuly written

What I admire about you, Nana, is that you share your feelings of sadness without feeling sorry for yourself and it such a way it allows people who read it to somehow find comfort in what you write. Sadness is something that is so heavy on the mind, and knowing the sun is still there is something you can know, but not feel at those moments.

It takes a lot of inner strength to keep fighting for your own happiness, but I know you can do it...and you will pull it off:)

Where shall I turn ?

^^
This question in the second stanza really got to me, it is so sad to know how lonesome you feel:(

Keep the faith, hun

Well done

* hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Nana
There is always hope at the end of the day. I think many of us just blind ourselves to it.
So much sad lonliness in your words.
Good job!
Take care
Love Cindy

First, the title is an excellent choice

and this pace between midnight & mind (though they dont rhyme) is captivating!

I liked it so much. The atmosphere is just gloomy +