Nightmare

by PinkyPrincess   Aug 21, 2010


I had a nightmare
Not the usual kind where
A scary person is chasing you
But the kind that gives you goose bumps,
The kind that leaves you hanging.

I was frightened
Not for my life,
But for my heart.
For the only person I ever loved
Was cheating on me with another girl.

He was embracing her, kissing her
And treating her like his princess.
Where I stood from afar,
I felt like his love prisoner,
A woman in jail simply for loving him.

He told me that he loved me more than anything
And that he would do anything for me.
Then how could he do this to me?
Hurt me and break my heart as if
It is worthless and nothing to him.

The next day I opened my eyes
And finally realized
That it was not a nightmare.
And that's when it really hit me,
My nightmare had become reality.

*** I know this poem isn't really well-written. It is just a quick poem I wrote to let out some feelings...

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Mmmmmmm lets keep ur opinion aside..u have done such a gr8 job " expressing ur feelings"
    I ffound this emotional..and penned in a very honest way.
    maybe some changes litte little ones will make it so mch better but as it is..its just perfect due to how much honest and deep ur words sounded

    i love ur poems
    i always can relate
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I actually think this poem is well written. The best form of poetry is when we aren't thinking about it and we are just letting out our feelings. It truly does help, and the raw emotion really makes for a great poem. So I think it was a great write.

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