Another story another past.

by lillie   Aug 24, 2010


Do you think you could find it. your heart so frozen and still, do you think you could find that spot that he once filled?

Can he be replaced with another pretty face? Could you forget the past and leave it in a different place. Do you think your heart could ever be the same without him near you, your love is nothing anymore but one big empty space.

Your love was once like a big room filled with beautiful colors, colors of love, trust, and honesty. That room once filled with those feelings seemed to fade, the color no more did it stay. it turned pale, the feelings of love, trust and honesty seem to have gone stale.

Nothing is perfect and never will be, there is no more trust as only doubt you put in me. This doubt haunts your brain, and at night when I'm not there you seem to go insane.

You know my weakness, and that weakness is you, so why do you doubt me like I'm just a everyday girl who you dont trust anymore, you say things to make me feel blue.

Sometimes things you will say that you know are my fears, and once those harsh words are used against me, you only put tears upon me. Seems you have distanced not knowing me at all, but remember i was the one who took the fall. I fell hard when you let me go, but the pain you caused me only made me grow.

The day that you lost me, you finally could see that putting doubt in me only set you free. The doubt you had in me was of the kind I would never doubt in you.

One day I had you and the next you set me free, I was never heartbroken as that day when you let me go . You cut me into pieces and somehow glued me back together. But slowly your words pull me apart.

& one of these days you will start to lose the faith you once had in me, the faith that defined our love for so long.

One day I will no longer be needed, my love will no longer last, and you will only put me as someone who was in your past.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    You know, I feel like some people are going to read this poem and find they have no clue how to read your rhyme scheme and they'll want to correct it, but I really liked it. I felt like it was just a rant. And thats how I read it! As if you were just venting and there was a few rhymes here and there...

    Love his tricky thats true, but those that are in our past are meant to be there for a reason!