So i am guesssing this is about your boyfriend ? haha at least that is what i gathered from reading your last piece. This was a sweet write :D good work !!!

Only the subjects are the opposite, the words don't have to be drr :)

Wonderful... keep trying out new styles, you're pretty good with them so far, ;)

I like this one, its short, sweet and touching

Check your parts of speech, "admired" is a Verb, "ing" words I believe Gerunds, "you, me" pronouns. Other wise well done

Very positive!
I love the happy mood I was able to feel while reading this sweet piece.
I love the way you penned his personality down ..and how you described yours..

sounded for me..nothing less than perfect.
a tender writing
5/5