Well so far my topical humor has reached the category two level. I should have known better than to fiddle with a riddle lol

Lol no it did make sense to me..let me tell u what i felt..this made me giggle seriously.i felt @ the beginning as if ur talking about some of ur frnds...like as if u gna meet and ur talking or describing them ..thats how I personally took it..and how i took it made me really laugh..u had some funny lines..am gna come back to paste ...

i hope to see another funny ones. i love them

5/5

Because
it makes the doe rise
but Earl will give it a whirl
Fiona will fart
right from the start\

LOL hilarious up there

Time for lots of tissue
when Gaston is an issue
>>haha thats cute as well..

As for Hermine
can't determine

Don't be too quick to snarl
at Julia and Karl

these been my fav..told u..i felt like ur talking about ur frnds or something..both ways
5/5 as i said...this IS funny

I sorta thought the same thing that you where comparing your friends to the people you mentioned and though it was funny and quite witty i was a lil confused simply because i wasnt for sure thats what you were referring to but it was an enjoyable read either way

You got a good giggle ^_^
Nice writing, stay inspired =]

This is very funny you had me laughing through out but in the beginning I thought yu were having a conversation with your friends.. But I like it it makes me laugh :-)

5/5

I will not edit this poem any further you can wiki the tropical systems to see how close I came lol