Comments : Out on the Limb

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This had realy cold medium u knw...gave me this cloudy winter view..
    so sad..and full of suffering..where flipped from image to another broken one.

    felt as if someone lost...ghosty..just was deeply written..deep enough to turn the real mood of the reader over...but allow me to choose my fav :

    Laughter lost
    within the wind,
    >>> how amazing this image it self is
    broken swing holds still.
    >>> waw..inspiring TRust me

    then..i loved this :

    No longer found
    down on the ground
    Blue Jays or Whippoorwill.>>> gr8 gr8 line !!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Thank you both for reading and commenting, One of these days I'll tell more about this write and what it means , but till then always have faith and hope, if you do all is not lost and all can be reborn.
    peace
    Ron

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    As I read this poem a life cycle of tree came to mind. Its like everything is lost but from a little thing life sprouts..giving hope. Liked it :)