I think I have to repeat myself, with what Im going to say, because its what I told for someone from a while.. this poem shows ur true feelings..and how u feel about the situation but the way its worded sounds more like release for the feelings u got..tho u can really make out of it something truely ,more poetic
dnt u agree?

but wont deny that the emotions u released r as sad as effective
so 5.5

I know im like whole year late, but as im reading back on the things i wrote im looking at this i can see itt was just a release it could be better.