by Mr. Darcy Aug 26, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
A whisper, a breath... |
by Naughtymouse
I am creeping about your poems and found this little gem :) |
by Ben Pickard
Some truly poetic lines in this - beautifully written. |
by gracey grey
Felt like i was watching "Blue Lagoon" all over again :) Very well written. Loved it! |
Wow... this poem is so beautiful and refreshing... It was like a breath of fresh air. Just reading it made me long for summer! I loved the content of the poem, the imagery you created and the structure. The structure reminded me of a short story and I was very intrigued.. |
by Lana
Nice refreshing read. It seems to me you want to grasp the joys of life with every fibre of your being and you are enjoying every moment of it. Very good imagery in this lovely verse. Well done. |