Michael,

Oh how nice it is to see you posting after all this time!!!!

I can see love his you in her grip, ha ha. I am so happy for you, my friend:)

Your poem is so full of this feeling of everlasting and all- overwhelming happiness. I love the wording, the images, everything about it. Reading it, I can see your sensitive soul shimmering through.

Horizontal rays begin to play, they dance and they glimmer, twinkle and shimmer. See how they skim each crest with glee and finesse. Way up high sun-rays fly...

...on snowy feathers they glide...

...glide, glide, surfing this summers song. Forever and together, footprints in the sand, memories of fingers in hands like laces entwined around yours and mine.

^^
Perfect, so much joy is in your words, so much happiness!

I enjoyed the way you made this format also, it gave it a very payfull touch, which I am sure you meant there to be:)

Welcome back,

((hugs))

5/5 Ingrid x

*playful

Omg... u go and then come with amazing thoughts and expressions through the beats of ur heart and wisdom of ur soul.

I have not been touched today as much as I have been touched right now.

you used so much emotions..and images that u weaved by feelings and inspiring expressions..

I can tell u this was written from deep deep inside ur heart...cause u was able to catch me deeply..

this is so FULL of images...really inspiring..am so happy i came across this..what a fantastic job u have done...after so long..with so much joy within the letters of ur words.

5/5
i hope to see more
soon!!

Nice refreshing read. It seems to me you want to grasp the joys of life with every fibre of your being and you are enjoying every moment of it. Very good imagery in this lovely verse. Well done.

Wow... this poem is so beautiful and refreshing... It was like a breath of fresh air. Just reading it made me long for summer! I loved the content of the poem, the imagery you created and the structure. The structure reminded me of a short story and I was very intrigued..

Well done!

Felt like i was watching "Blue Lagoon" all over again :) Very well written. Loved it!

Some truly poetic lines in this - beautifully written.

I am creeping about your poems and found this little gem :)

I love how you've structured this it makes for really easy and absorbing reading and, as per, your word choice is spot on, really loving this write Michael, hugely poetic and heartfelt.