Nice job, i could imagine each line as i read it, congrats.. in the last stanza though you hav the word"say" written twice, but nice job =)

~tiff~

Thank you very much for the comment and the rating. I wrote this when I was 12 so it's very childish compared to some poems on here. Thank You so much.

That was beautiful, really a great poem, loved the structure, gave it a start middle end that summed up an elegant tale of love. Congrats.