Losing My Senses

by Simikiel   Aug 27, 2010


I cant be normal anymore
the scars of my past disable me.
I cant feel a touch
I'm too afraid it will turn hateful.
I cant see
I'm blinded by
fear and rage
afraid of any threat
and incensed from being afraid.
i cant taste;
all i can is copper and salt,
brought from the blows
Ive endured time
and time again.
i cant smell;
lightning pervades
my senses as i
shrink from everyone and everything.
i cant hear;
the whispers of my past,
the temptations from habits repressed
deafen me.
but worst of all
i cannot feel.
i am afraid to
open my heart
not wanting to be a
cutting board for
your anger and rage
to scar once more.
I'm losing my senses
getting dull from this pain
how can i be normal
if my life is so insane?

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  • 14 years ago

    by Simikiel

    Thanks you guys im glad you like it considering yall are way better poets than me :)

  • 14 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    Woah _ I loved it.
    The kind of poem that you can feel pain through;

    It was beautifully written;
    I loved the way you made the end rhyme.

    Well Done.

  • 14 years ago

    by iRobbiee

    I likee this.. Its like every time yur hurt yu loose one of yur sense... this is really nice... I feel the same way.. Like yu just start to lose parts of yur self..

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