I likee this.. Its like every time yur hurt yu loose one of yur sense... this is really nice... I feel the same way.. Like yu just start to lose parts of yur self..

Woah _ I loved it.
The kind of poem that you can feel pain through;

It was beautifully written;
I loved the way you made the end rhyme.

Well Done.

Thanks you guys im glad you like it considering yall are way better poets than me :)