Soul to Soul

by Anthony M   Aug 27, 2010


Gail force winds announce
furiously upon my windows
Neptune's trident shatters glass
sea spray stinging my face
wispy silhouette beyond the surf
timeless beauty beheld in my gaze,
a siren no doubt luring me out to sea
wading spellbound into the crashing waves
prepared to meet my doom
for just a moment spent with her
watching my soul depart body
seas become calm, ripple free
vision of mermaid now in front of me
her soul journeys to me in return,
Neptune slides beneath the surface
broad smile painted upon his face.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    Wow, great use of language and mythology. I was captivated from start to finish. I love the use of Neptunes tridant. You have created a wonderful piece. Congrats.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lana

    Another lovely verse from you. So may beautiful lines that I could not pick one as a favourite, they all blend so well together. Nicely done.

  • 14 years ago

    by iamYOURS

    Aww this poem is really cool : )

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Amazing piece..u have such a deep insight..u wrote this from the beats of the beats and i was just touched by the sweetness

    allow me to choose my fav lines

    her soul journeys to me in return,
    Neptune slides beneath the surface
    broad smile painted upon his face.

    u have it...u got the talent !!
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Another beautiful poem Anthony :)
    Wonderful imagery. The picture you have painted for the reader is awesome.
    Great job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

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