Lovers

by Lady Nik   Aug 27, 2010


"Don't forget me,"
she said just
loud enough for the
people in the paintings
to hear. His only
response was--
"could the moon
forget the sun?"

He knew he had
melted himself into
her heart forever. He
would never let go of
the fiery sadness called
desire and she would
never love again.

That was the grief they
choose to live with. The
ripping of their souls from
one passionate kiss.

Lovers...the lone word
that explains the completity
of the world they have been
sucked into.

*A poem I wrote for a contest using the quote "never let go of the fiery sadness called desire."

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  • 14 years ago

    by Spirit

    Your poem is very well written, but it seems like an exert. Your poem feels as if it belonged in the middle of a story. You talk about a rememberance, but then you add that the love is still there. This left me yearning to know what had happened to make the people in your poem fell like that. I give you props on the insert of your quote, and the cliff hanger added a mystery to your poem that the reader must figure out for themselves.
    Overall I really liked your poem and I wish you luck in the contest.
    Thanks for the read, and please excuse my spelling/.
    >~Spirit~>

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Awwww... :(
    ur thoughtful and sweet but u have a sad mind lol..i can related a little little bit too..
    loved it
    so much and added to my fav..

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A very sad but beautiful poem you have written. I love the ending and I think you did a good job with the contest. Good job and keep writing.

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