Left in Fragments

by Jad   Aug 27, 2010


Hearts kept together by love,
Radiating happy thoughts every day.
Mines lost in fragments
Broken by life on my way.

Rejected, Scarred, and treated wrong,
Fearing to let love come in.
I let moments slip away for
My old wounds haven't mend.

A heart so broken inside,
Crippling all I know.
I wish for a better future,
But I have nothing to show.

So I'm left in fragments,
Hating Myself all along.
I want to finally let go,
But everything ended to wrong.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Ive missed reading your writes Austin... they are always so heart touching. I can relate to theses words so much...

    "A heart so broken inside,
    Crippling all I know."

    I have a poem on here expressing similiar thoughs , in mine it speaks of a "shattered" heart ( its an older poem of mine called "My Heart" ) yours reminds me of it. Very well written & expressed Austin. Take care & keep penning ! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Many points of make..but briefly...if anyone says this rhyme was forced am gna gigle..cause it was flawless..

    ur ideas and emotions been all related to each other..and u expressed ur self very well.

    ur word choice was in its place and u did know how to play with them.

    your feelings been too much negative and i hopeur only letting it out, cause there is alwaus another way..what ends wrong doesnt exsists

    5/5
    keep it up

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