Oh really?

i want a 3rd part...lol..amazingly expressed..i liked the expressions u used after the 3rd stanza a lot..made it darker to smoother regarding the pace of the thoughts..

never stop writing..uu d impressed and leave an influence..DARKLY :P

5/5

I have pictures in my book for each chapter that I wish I could post here along with the verse. Tell you what, after I finish posting the whole 13 parts I'll email you the book with pictures. The picture of Midnight the killer is great.

Yesss :]] just a good as the first one. I love the darkness and how you use it throughout thw whole piece. Very great work :] off to read the next part :]] Nik