I Miss Your Love

by Sunshine   Aug 28, 2010


I Miss your Love
^^

When the darkness of my
hair, flirts with the breeze

When the beats of my heart
pump bitter tears

When those tears ripple
stories about falling leaves

and the gardens of my being
become fields of naked trees

and the sweetness of flowers
turns sour, as its fading color
lacks the beauty to please

When the rage of my sorrow
beats the waves of stormy seas

As I wake up facing the truth
after sinking in pleasant dreams

and how I miss your love

When I plant these pity hopes
in barren fields , and around
thirsty streams ..

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  • 14 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    When those tears ripple
    stories about falling leaves

    EPIC !!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Wow ur good haha 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    Ahw, I Adored This Poem.
    You Have Some Great Talent, I Envy It.
    Make's My Poems Look Rubish:P Haha.
    I Love your Style Of Writing, And How you Just Say All That you Need To Say.
    And Also A Very Nice Flow=D
    5/5
    Can You Comment And Rate One Of My Poems Too? That Would Be Great!
    Much Love, Jessi<3

  • 14 years ago

    by Alex D

    "When those tears ripple
    stories about falling leaves

    and the gardens of my being
    become fields of naked trees"

    Awesome awesome awesome lines, theyre breath taking. Over all very cool idea as far as flow and form for this and the rhyming was clever and fit well. 5/5 very nice

  • 14 years ago

    by Cassandra

    Wow your really guud i love this poem and im glad to have youhh as muh friend lol thanks again
    5/5

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