This piece was insane! (in a good way). I don't usually read post on here, this site has kind of died. or been taken over by talentless morons... anyway.... I loved this post.. it was WORTH the read, the repetitive lines were perfect, usually that annoys me but in this post it worked out fantastic, I really do believe the eyes are sort of a window into the human soul..strictly because the most expression is shown through them in the face... other than body language and tone of voice.. the eyes are the way to look "into" someone, if you know what i mean... and by making eye contact with someone it could either be a way to invade, or connect...
My eyes are blue.. so i loved the first stanza, The last stanza was what tied it all together though.. and i love it. Unless your profile deceives me, your 14? correct? When i was 14 and writing... nothing of mine really tied together this well.. so great work.. and keep digging at it... keep pushing at the craft of writing and you could end up being somewhere you never imagined. Congrats.

~MartyrAmanda