by Sunshine Aug 29, 2010
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
On either sides of the window lie |
I loved this poem a lot & thought you definitely met the challenge. I've read it several times & have loved it even more each & every time...You did an excellent job! |
by Meena Krish
I liked the title and the feelings of frustration, yearnings & sadness this write captured..well done with this write dear :) |
SunShine, |
I just cannot express how impressed I am. I would have to borrow from the master to comment on this how may I speak of beauty lest she be the weaver of my speech. To say anything less could not even come close to the praise this poem deserves. The lines flowed within their selves and the rhyme was so subtle that only a fool could think anything here was forced...how inspiring!!! |
by chind
Another amazing piece. I love your writing, it always creates such vivid images. :D |