by Michael D Nalley Aug 29, 2010
category :
Friendship, family /
cyber friendship
Much too beautiful to criticize |
by Ben Pickard
What a beautiful piece of work. Lovely. |
by shadow
I LUV THIS POEM SO MUCH. PLZZ CHECK OUT SOME OF MY POEMS,SO I CAN GET YOUR ADVICE |
by shadow
I LUV THIS POEM SO MUCH. PLZZ CHECK OUT SOME OF MY POEMS,SO I CAN GET YOUR ADVICE |
by TSI25
Despite the heavily religious connotations i do like it very much. The rhymes are apt, the flow is good, and its comparably happier than a lot of the other poems on this sight. It also has some beautiful imagery, the scene of the angel flying with the broken wing ans singing through the birds was particularly lucid for me. well done, 5/5 |
by Sunshine
Again and again I find this poem such a "sun" for my rainy days... lol ..thank u again and again XD i LOVE to read it over and over |