Lay with me tonight?

by iRobbiee   Aug 29, 2010


Laying in bed
Thinking about you
Wishing you were here
So I can relax because your near
I want to fall asleep to your voice
because that's the only thing that I've been longing to hear

I want to feel your lips
Against mine,
And the feeling of your hands on my body,
I want to feel your finger tips caressing my back
Making me laugh because im so ticklish..

I want to roll over and gaze into your
big chocolate eyes
And wonder what your thinking,
Then I'll smile,
And scoot closer and whisper I love you
Then fall asleep in your arms

Can you come lay with me tonight?,
So I know that everything is alright,
While listening to you whisper,
Sweet nothings in my ear
Telling me that,
There's nothing else to fear

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  • 14 years ago

    by East Poetry

    This poem posses such a pure honesty, In every word you wrote down as you express your love
    to your man. Great job, keep writing.

    thank you for the wonderful comment on my poem too!

  • 14 years ago

    by iRobbiee

    Actually this is one of my newest ones from this year thank you

  • 14 years ago

    by Spirit

    To me this is one of your better poems.
    I can see your growth through your poems.

    I love the word choice in this poem, as well as the introduction of rhyme. The message that you place in this poem is wonderful and rings true. Just work on the reduction of repitition and you're set.
    Thanks for the read.
    >~Spirit~>

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