I love the last line. I can really relate to that. As Jeff said a very beauitful poem. So simple but so filled with love and powerful meanings. Nice work dear. Nik

This is soooo sweet it will make a lovely Valentine's card..ver nice :)

Two hearts I have, inside of me

Bounded; by fortune they are meant to be

For I have mine, and I lovingly hold yours

in a place where feelings pumps & pours.

^^
& should be and!!!!!!

This magic lays in a place which no one knows

throbs; though never gets old, but always grow.

^^
Grows

Here's the place, and the secret says

I have not one heart, but I do have two

For inside of mine, I hold that one pumping inside u.

This was sooo cute, heh, indeed worthy of a Valentine's card:)

Not too long ago I told my significant other that in oder to truly love, you need to give up a piece of your own identity, to allow that other to live inside your heart and now you have written just what I told him:)

Good work sweetheart,

* hugs and some more hugs!*

5/5 Ingrid

A poem close to my own heart

This was a magnificent write ! It was powerful and sweet! I love the idea of this piece. A very well penned poem :D

The only suggestion i want to make is
"This magic lays in a place which no one knows"
- where no one knows. I dunno, to me that just sounds better. which seems like such a sharp word, where as where is soft. haha and since this is such a gentle piece, i just thought it sounded better xD But nevertheless, AMAZING (L)

Beautifully done, what a reassuring & beautiful feeling it is to have someone else's heart so close to yours! The feeling of having both yours & someone else's heart. Awesome