BEnz...flawlessly SAD ..i fell in love with ur opening lines..and i was extremely touched though out the poem.

I loved ur expressions and ur word choice...and about the feelings u expressed ..so much related..

5/5
well done

We do indeed bottle up emotions inside... until the tears flow. But your single tear in your poem makes it so sad! ... and deep. Well written Ben and expressed ( as all your writes are :) )

Very Well Done :)
( I Love the rhyme in your poem also..) All the Best! & take care... Olwin.

Bottled up thoughts as well as feelings cause us such heartache..and like Olwin said a single tear does make it even more sad..touching..take care.

Kuro, emotions that swell inside of us, if only we could let them all out and start again.
Excellent write

This poem really amazed me! Especially the depth of emotions each stanza contained. This poem was flawless, wonderful job!!! Loved the line when you said something unexpected upon your cheek, that was a wonderful way of describing it. Loved this whole piece. 5/5. :)