Midnight Madness Part 5: "Out of the Mouth of Babe"

by Ronald Edwards   Aug 31, 2010


Nervous as a virgin
on her wedding night,
regained my lost composure,
closed the door and locked it tight.

I stood there holding firmly
the package in my hand.
Turned slowly, walked across the room
and placed it on the stand.

Whatever could the contents be?
I filled my lungs with air.
My skin tingled wildly
anxiously to see whats there.

The cover came off slowly,
illuminated by the light.
Midnight put inside the box
two items in plain sight.

First there was a china plate
white as the driven snow.
It had a sterling silver top
to hide what was below.

Beside it neatly folded
a velvet handkerchief.
Within it held the spoils
of his insidious mischief.

I raised the top from off the plate
revealing now in view,
a swatch of skin, with a tattoo
Oh Babe, my love is true

I dove deep into memory
Did he ever have such art?
There werent any on his arms
or on any other part.

Good God I gasped, as I transfixed
upon the velvet pouch.
I picked it up in my right hand
and sat slowly on the couch.

My blood ran cold with beads of sweat
dripping down my back.
I was not ready to behold
of that in the velvet sack.

A card fell out, with a tongue
looking like a turnip rabe.
Written boldly said the words,
Out of the mouth of Babe.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A dark story if ever I read one...

    I have a feeling you are good at this, story telling.

    Well written, no flaws, good flow.

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    All right !!! Sooooooooo glad you all are into this story. The tongue was a bit over the top but what the heck, Midnight is a sick dude hahaha
    Oh it gets better, yes it does, keep reading.
    2morrow its part 6 "At the Crack of Dawn"
    Keep them comments coming :-)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    GOOOOOOO GOO GOOO....im loving these..so much..and thnx a lot for the email..but still
    am gna commet over this one..

    u have a realy STRONG sentence structure and u no bet have the gift to catch ones interest

    5/5never stop

  • 14 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Hey Jad,

    this is an on going murder mystery. You need to read parts 1-4 which I have posted to understand part 5. They are quick reads.
    Thanks for your comments

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A interesting story in the from of a poem but I don't quit think I got the meaning of it. The flow was good from verse to verse though. Good job and keep writing.