Comments : Unveiling Dreams.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lana

    We are the only ones who can prevent small dreams from becoming bigger ones. Sometimes we lack the confidence to fulfill them and they never reach their full potential but, judging by your words here I feel they will become a reality for you in the future.

    Very good use of words in this verse. Nicely done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A lovely poem about how we can dream and do anything and everything in our own dreams. Great description and a easy flowing piece. I couldn't really single out one think that stood out because it all stood out really well. Good job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Ohh my myy myyy...ur so creative aint u !!
    what another new amazing poem u have versed for my eyes over here !!

    i just looove love ur expressions temps..they are soo magical u know..
    keep writing..its such a pleasure to read ur work

    5/5