This was really creepy, the feeling of someone watching over you...gives me chills hahaahh. Well done girl!

Wow, this was really great, but when you wrote "suspect" did you mean expect? Anyways, I know that feeling well, and I hope that it ceases for you. But what are you referring to exactly?

I really dunno... I just felt like there was a monster in my closet last night and that when I go to sleep someone always near watching really close..:-/ suspect and expect they both sound good...ill figure it out thank you..

I like this poem. i remember feeling these moments all the time with that someone you like. it brings me back.

ty for commenting on my poem too btw. means a lot to me, no one has rated or commented in weeks.

Doesn't happen often, but I was actually captivated after the first verse, I wanted to read on to see who he was.

I think you are an incredible writer with an incredible talent. Keep it up.