Comments : Rumination

  • 14 years ago

    by Lana

    When I read this at first I thought it was about a lady (partner) that you dream of but after a couple of reads I'm not sure. Maybe it's about a daughter you dream of having one day, don't really know, just a notion I got from the title I guess.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A very interesting write which leaves the
    reader to wonder about who this "dear lady"
    might be, perhaps a Godess maybe..? A
    heartfelt write..very nice.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    I'm at a lost of who this dear lady was. But the emotions are good and I loved the way how you can always know where they are no matter how far away you are. Good job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I so much loved this piece..i found it really surprising ..and got a dark unclear side which makes it but more and more interesting

    and no bet the wording was so good...ur opening lines..so sweet..very deep

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Souray, great imagery , enjoyed the write, thanks for sharing

  • 14 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Brilliant expressions.