It is like fighting with an inner demon who
drains you from inside out. Very descriptive
as well as interesting!

Good descriptions once again in continuing your story. Emotions are all over the place in each piece and they each bring something new. Good job and keep writing.

Im loving this story more and more.. scary tho this part was lol..spoooky :P a little

and these been my best

Was then I noticed in the darkness
both his eyes were red.
Two balls of crimson glowing brightly
like the living dead.

Jekyll what I did last night
is no concern of yours.
I skinned him bare and bleed her out,
the both of them were bores.

ur description works so well for someone like me..
i love all ur work
5/5