Emotional Surge

by Jad   Sep 2, 2010


A collage of feeling,
Not adequate enough.
To portray the killing
My heart has endured with each thrust.

Pain overdosing my mind,
Taking sanity away.
Enduring though these time,
As my heart decays.

Abiding in a fear
As I'm pulled each way.
Wiping away the tears,
For the words I can't say.

Suffering isn't enough?
Destructive ideas corrode.
No longer able to rough
This mountainous load.

My body has reached the end.
I'm so thoroughly scourge.
At last the emotions have rend
From this emotional surge.

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  • 10 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Well done!
    strong and deep words

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This poem touches me so much. It's being a while that i havn't red a poem and before the end i had to take a pause to savor the beauty of such a sad , love poem like this. We all feels emotions, but not most of us could put it in words like you do. Very, very well done. Keep it up, kel.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    It feels like one is caught in a whirlwind of
    emotion..good choice of words where feelings
    are poured out..congrats on the win!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Veryy well done..congratulations..and this proves what I said for u last night in the club chatting thread last night haha

    gr888888 job

  • 14 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Some of the grammar is a little off and periods seem to be used for style's sake but without regard for sentence structure. Other than that, I like the "Suffering isn't enough?" insertion. It struck me as curious and different - good things. I also like that you used the word "mountainous!" Very nice.

    A good write overall.

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