Ok now, If you keep that up your going to make me cry ! I knew I would enjoy this one simply because of the title . Life is always such a journey & often a hard road to travel .
Yet, I always find myself anxious for the next journey to begin. Though this was a sad poem in appearance , It was overwhelmingly beautiful , It's sadness gave value to beauty leaving the reader desiring to draw closer .
What a beautiful write you have penned here.
The storyline reminds me of my poem :--The load You Carry.. though I must say it does not compare to this one . Such a beautiful poem, Thank you for sharing .....5/5.....Jim

Thanku so much Jim! :)) Glad you enjoyed and would love to read your " The Load You Carry " poem :) Cheers 4now.. Olwin.

AMAZING...a veryyyyyy veryyyyyy intresting piece..with so muuuuchhhhhhh EMOTIONS ...the title u chose waw...was a poem by it self..and then ur wisdom shined through out the lines.

i love how u verse the words up and how u make such beautiful lines out of the insights u got

this poem is so pretty gd..so pretty precious

5/5
keep writing

Well done, thanks for sharing

This write shows the strength of your faith in
God and your unfaltering devotion..nicely
penned!