Such raw and powerful emotions you have expressed through this piece ! This piece was great, and i can relate to this on some levels, which just brings back old memories. Lovely work ! kudos

This is a very very very gd poem by u..my fav yet..
so much emotions over here..thgat u worded this time in a veyr descriptive way..
I just love how ur feelings r penned down using images..

a very sad one ..and I no bet had tears while Reading
I just love thids piece
and trust me
I relate to it
5/5

Absolutely incredible! You have a way with bringing emotions through a poem.

I would love for you to read my stuff some time:)