Great flow to your poem, in fact ive read a few of your poems now and your structures are great and always a wonderful chilling read :)

..new events...how nice
u really got powerful wording and
u got news ideas for each part
scary person lol

umm Listen hard and listen good,
to what you have to do.
If you dont youll make the menu
of the local zoo.
>>loved the events as a story but
i wish u can change the flow a bit
was offf..

Midnight didnt move an inch
but stared into my eyes.
He knew I meant what I just said
arguing would be unwise.
>>i so loved this one.flowed the best
a gr8 stanza and my fav

5/5