Heart Sweat

by ADEL   Sep 3, 2010


The time you are, crossing the sky
Peering down or gazing high
Know my darling, know that my
Heart is hoping, all to die

And my tear is falling, down my cheek
And the strong in me, turning weak
To place sadness in the eye
Filled with groans and cry

The time you are, flying far
Before a moon or a star
Know my tears, my tears are
Boiling over, over the jar.

( C ) Copyright 2010 ADEL ATTIYEH

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  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    I really like the flow and rhyming. it made it such a joy to read, even through the sad feelings it portrayed. nicely written indeed.

    ~kuro

  • 14 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Adel, a bit twisted, not sure about this poem... I'll have to read it a few more times, thanks for sharing

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A nice but very sad write. The emotions are felt deeply in each of your lines. Though a small poem you have gotten the message across clearly about wanting to be with the one you love. Good job and keep writing.

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