A nice but very sad write. The emotions are felt deeply in each of your lines. Though a small poem you have gotten the message across clearly about wanting to be with the one you love. Good job and keep writing.

Adel, a bit twisted, not sure about this poem... I'll have to read it a few more times, thanks for sharing

I really like the flow and rhyming. it made it such a joy to read, even through the sad feelings it portrayed. nicely written indeed.

~kuro