Comments : I Will Not Take a Knee

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    To the birds of heaven,
    a feast I make for them.
    As parts of you lay on the ground,
    your flesh I will condemn.

    what a stanza Prince charmer haha
    ...i love this poem and its title
    i loved ut wording, and the darkness you tried to beam, through ur words.

    well done
    well written
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow this was a wonderful poem. Not as dark as your other pieces but still a good read. I enjoyed it very much. Keep it up :] Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Chaos

    This poem is really good, I hope you can keep writing no matter what, writing is an out let for some people.