I loved how you started off. The rhyme scheme was clearly visible, and the meaning was profound.
Halfway through your poem you stopped rhyming, this confused me. You no longer had the same rhyme or flow. I don't know if you did it to give the voice of rebellion in your poem, but I found myself getting lost anyway.
I love the line "true to myself to the tenth" it is clever and refreshing.
I thank you for the read and wish you luck.
>~Spirit~>