...waw...this is absolutely a dark poem and was kind of a narrative story but indeed lyrical.
i was diving through the imagination you penned...got so many dark yet descriptive lines..a real dimness..and i just found ur ending lines amazing

5/5keep writing

This was a great poem in the from of a story. A truly dark poem with good descriptions of your characters and a flow to match. Their was a great deal of creativity that one could see in this piece as well. And as Nana already said, the ending stanza was great. How old enemies will once again reunite. Good job and keep writing.