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my silverpoet !!
this title is just SO poetic ..so full of contradiction..and absolutely VERY catchy..

and then your poem..i donuu i had to read again..was such a unique one.
you do have the gift, am gladly reading your work

5/5

for a sheer moment's
wounded pride
you would be triggered
into vengeance

my best part

This was a strong poem with many diverse emotions going across it. I loved the metaphor in which you used to portray your ideas to the reader. So much sadness and uncertainty in the lines made this poem very interesting.

Then your pupils grazed
across my face
vindictive
malevolence conspiring

What a strong line! The seeming harm coming from this person is so easily felt as the imagery pulls the reader in and makes it feel like you are that person. Over all good job and keep writing.