Do You Wish It Was Me?

by Lady Nik   Sep 4, 2010


She's beautiful--
that's the only word that fits
this princess you gave your
heart to. She's bubbly
like a ready glass of
champagne. Eyes that
let you feel the ocean
and the sky.

I wonder if she knows that it
is I that holds your soul...

You're handsome in a
young Clint Eastwood kind of
way. Wild and unattainable
until you met me. How did I
stop the stallion in you?
Turn you into a respectable part of
society...just for you to leave.

I don't know why I'm here today...
but I can never turn down an invite

I'm sitting still in the very back row
like a perfectly sculpted piece of art,
I can see how your hands
shake as you reach for her
veil. Pull back slow--
searching for something more
in her eyes. Your lips touch hers
and I can feel how frigid
you've grown as the night
comes to an end. You hold her
hand and a trace of uncertainty
breaks through you. Your eyes
fall to her hands then to my face.

Do you wish it was me that held you
together?

*For a contest where I had to use the song title "Do you wish it was me?"*

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  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem made me feel it was based on a real romance and I would not change any part of it

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Excellent job there girl :-) Great wording, emotions running hot and high. good luck

  • 14 years ago

    by Ken

    This was amazing, something I had to read twice. it makes me want to start writing again. Great job really great.

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    You have improved so much dear Nik :)

    Clap Clap Clap XD

    Your writing skills has matured, your writing style is now appealing and more professionally picked.

    Keep up the good work!

  • 14 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    This wass completely amazing..
    you are an amazing poet, and i bet you won those contest also..5/5

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