Flight. [Senryu]

So little has been actually written into this piece and yet the great imagery you use portrays what you want the reader to see. Good job and keep writing.

This reads so brilliantly and sparks images into my mind immediately, I love how you didn't overdo the short amount of words but did them justice.

Beautiful and many can take on a meaning for this.

MaryAnne

A really lovely Senryu, good imagery and words that somehow make this seem much more than the amount of syllables you used.

Good work girl, proud of you:)

5/5 Ingrid

Mmm this is a gd piece..i saw this form with double stanzas from a while..which i think would be better for a more meaningful poem..cause a little this needs more details.

5/5 tho i know u can make it better