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by Sunshine
Maybe this is for a frnd..but due to he darkness and sadness of the poem I think u shouldnt put it under this category / maybe sad ? or dark ?now the poem..oh man was really good, tho i felt like it was a free verse and a rhyming one a the same time...but i wont comment over that. the way u opened it was just amazing and sad..and ilove how u repeated the 1st stanza and changed the last two lines.. more over wat i liked as well wasI know we all struggle and I know we all slip up Some of us cope while some shout bottom's up ^^^ this.so so so so true...some ppl cop with it and some ppl let it out.I found this a very interesting poem 5/5