by Maverick
I really like this, now I may only be 20 but I still have some concept of that childhood being gone, and the nostalgia for it. Your piece here hits lots of spots, I especially loved the part about each piece of wood being a ship, because I totally imagined that all the time as a kid. Very well done, I also like the concise manner of your stanzas, yet they keep there poignant characteristics. Good job. |
by Jess
I Love This Poem! |