Comments : When I was the greatest hero....

  • 14 years ago

    by Maverick

    I really like this, now I may only be 20 but I still have some concept of that childhood being gone, and the nostalgia for it. Your piece here hits lots of spots, I especially loved the part about each piece of wood being a ship, because I totally imagined that all the time as a kid. Very well done, I also like the concise manner of your stanzas, yet they keep there poignant characteristics. Good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    I Love This Poem!
    :O Great Talent.
    I Like The Way You Writeee.
    So Easygoing.
    Great Job!:)
    -jessi.