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by Ingrid
Hi Paul, I have a few suggestions for you that I will put between brackets, feel free to use of ignore them: This world is not my home, my home is in Heaven above. It's a place where life is eternal, and filled with an abundance of love. ^^ I can agree 100% with that and what a beautiful and heart warming thought:) If tonight my maker should call me home, [I'm] prepared and is happy to go. Wouldn't miss a single thing, from this wicked world down here below. When I get to Heaven, what a joyous day that will be. [Seeing] the faces of my loved ones, at Heavens gate, eagerly awaiting me. It would be such an honor, to receive my makers grace. It would be a greater honor, to meet my Jesus face to face. Yes, away from the toxins of this world, I will journey eagerly, to take up eternal residence, in that place my Jesus prepared for me. I think people that might not believe in God, start doing so when they read you:) Well done, a pleasure as always, God bless, 5/5 Ingrid
Forgot one! I'm prepared and [ am] happy to go Either you say : "I am" or just leave out the verb all together, both options are good.
by Sylvia
You are right this world is not our home, heaven is. Well done.